HI, in witing we are learning about how to wite a diray entry in world war 1 I wote in a prospectiv of a soilder in world war 1.I cleced lots of in formacsin.
here is my work.
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
HI, in witing we are learning about how to wite a diray entry in world war 1 I wote in a prospectiv of a soilder in world war 1.I cleced lots of in formacsin.
here is my work.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Great work Adele - good writing as if you were there - its hard to imagine what it would have been like.
ReplyDeletethank you Dad I love the feedback;)
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