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Monday, May 17, 2021

my war diray

 HI, in witing we are learning about how to wite a diray entry in world war 1 I wote in a prospectiv of a soilder in world war 1.I cleced lots of in formacsin.

here is my work. 



2 comments:

  1. Great work Adele - good writing as if you were there - its hard to imagine what it would have been like.

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  2. thank you Dad I love the feedback;)

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