coco cranch is my new cereal
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, November 26, 2020
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Hi Adele,
ReplyDeleteI would definitely buy this cereal, mainly because I want to get the 'gold' fox card, it looks really flash. What did you find most difficult about making the advertisement?
Have a great day,
Mrs M
Hi Adele its me grace i'm from south horn by school.I loved this because you gave it detail in a cool way.I was interested that you added two cute little foxes in there.I noticed that you put a lot of effete in your work.Where do you get all this great work from?.From grace
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