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Thursday, August 20, 2020

how to make an egg sandwich

 This is istrachuns of how to make an egg sandwich

 

1 comment:

  1. Hey Adele,
    It's Mrs McIntyre from South Hornby School. I liked the way you numbered your instructions, that way I can clearly see where I am up to. Did you think about adding capital letters to the start of all your sentences? How come you chose to write instructions for an egg sandwich, is it because of Winn Dixie or because you like them?
    Have a great day,
    Mrs M

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