This is istrachuns of how to make an egg sandwich
I am a Year 4 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Mrs Jones. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Thursday, August 20, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
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Hey Adele,
ReplyDeleteIt's Mrs McIntyre from South Hornby School. I liked the way you numbered your instructions, that way I can clearly see where I am up to. Did you think about adding capital letters to the start of all your sentences? How come you chose to write instructions for an egg sandwich, is it because of Winn Dixie or because you like them?
Have a great day,
Mrs M